Wheel of Fortune

This photo was taken for the Channel4 Yr1 Competition. The sky

colour, the motion blur on the wheel and the motion blur on the bus

were added in the post production phase using paint shop pro 5...

 

... what do people think? you constructive critism would be greatly

appreciated.

If i had a quid for every shot of that of that damm wheel on the the c4 website i woundnt give a shit about winning, Its one of the better ones though

This is not a bad picture at all, and I feel a little guilty for critisising (but I guess that's the purpose of this forum...).

• I like the colour of the sky.
• The sloping building on the right is distracting.
• The wheel moves too much -- distracting again.
• The London bus is a very nice touch!
• But it's a shame you cut off the bottom?
• I seem to detect motion in the building on the left?
• The forground is just too dark -- or is it my monitor?
• Shame about the people on the bottom right.

B no, I really kind of like it! Honest.

this is your best photograph so far. it works beautifully.

i like this shot. though i would have framed it slightly differently. Only by panning down a bit to show the whole bus and maybe cropping ever so slightly tighter

Remember when looking at things to change, look at the things that made you like it. Having said that, there are lots of things that would make this more appealing, but I like the idea, and I like the fact that you're going out there and trying to put what is in your head onto paper. Keep going. You're on the right track.