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Lovely great job as always.

Beautiful model, great skin tones and lighting. Congrats.

Lovely model and pose, but your lighting causes her hair to blend into the background. A hair light would have done wonders.

Jerry

Why smile Jim?! I think a serious expression would suit better this pose! Cheers my friend and come to me sometime!

PDE

I don't agree with my learned friend above, my portfolio is full of modles smiling. It shows them as they truly our, what closer to glamour can we get than that.

A charming photo above, an excellent pose and the model is wonderfully relaxed. I don't really see much of the hair on my monitor Jim, but then I have one of those that resemble televisions from the fifties, it could well be your preference though of course and why not  .. :-)

PS  I met a model once that knew you and she told me what a wonderful atmosphere you created ..

Gee .. sorry for the spelling mistakes above .. I wrote this hurriedly ..

Jim, are you way .. anxious to see the new work......

 I am traveling. I should be shooting again in a week or two.

JIm Phelps

Hi Jim,

Masterful act with excellent skin tones and good contrast. Like your use of the black background. And totally natural, smiling with an interesting and different pose. Very well done.

All the best

well done Jim

best regards from spain

I like the pose, maybe a little more light on the right arm and hair (both are lost in the background). A few suggestions:

1- Lose the smile

2- Lose the red shoes. Very distracting in my opinion.