Day at the Apple Orchard

This picture was a candid moment taken during an afternoon of apple

picking, the girl is my daughter and the boy is the son of our friends. I'd

appreciate any comments and constructive criticism on the photo. thanks!

Lovely picture! Did you blure the background yourself?  When you look at the picture my eyes go more to the background then to the children.  It makes me focuse on the background more its to strong.  Try making the background a bit softer.  But the children are wonderfull.  It looks like your doughter wanted to share the apple (what a lucky little boy:)

I think this is what he had in mind.