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Beautiful model, great pose and great light, all of the best.

Seth, this is very well presented. For my taste, I'd liked a little less saturation. One slight criticism, the head board/bed posts into the distance are a little distracting.

Seth, if this is truly your first attempt at a glamour nude, you're well on your way!  ;o)   You have excellent DOF here, and an interesting pose.  I agree with Starvy that it's a bit over saturated.  The headboard doesn't bother me at all, and in fact, since it is sufficiently out of focus, actually adds some value to the image.  This might also make for an interesting B&W.

Seth, This is a good start. I feel sharper focus on the eyes would help.

Thank you all for your comments.  They will help me greatly in future shoots.