Embrace Models: Daniel L and Kai

PDE

I am finding your flash or strobe to be a shade too bright. Perhaps it is intentional but I sense a feeling of 'staged' in this composition and as a result, it endears itself to me little. The hairy legs are distracting in a not very tasteful way and could have done with a touch of blur.

dj,

I will disagree with Mr. Goodfellows.  At first glance, I was not impressed with this image, but the more I look at it, I suspect that your subjects may be two who live a lifestyle that is alternative to myself and this style of image may be what appeals to them.  Not everyone lives in a world of or appreciates a 3:1 light ratio with a Rembrandt lighting pattern on an Old Masters background.  I will say that I find the image a bit too contrasty for my liking.  I also prefer to have some separation of subject from background.  Just my preferences, you as the artist must choose.  I do admire you for posting an image probably a lot of us have little or no experience photographing.  I am going to rate this image, but not very high.  Keep up your efforts.

Warmest regards,

David R. Lewis

Pierre say it " great stuff" and I add two good looking dudes. More of this alternative life style image will educate many PN members!!!  Warm regards.