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It's a nice bloom, however, I feel like it was photographed through glass. It comes across to me as very one dimensionally flat. While my mind knows this isn't true, my eyes keep seeing it that way. I think you might consider trying for enough DOF to get the throat sharp. Toning the bright green adjacent to the outside edge of the bloom down would also create some tonal separation. It's a nice concept.

Beautiful floral work, rich of details and original colors, wishing you all of the best.