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Ivan,

She is certainly a beautiful girl. You have focused well on her eyes. She has good eye contact with the camera (viewer). I love the soft romantic feel to this portrait. Her expression is pleasant. She has very good catch lights. The lighting is good. Her soft skin tone works well with this image and the concept. The background is nicely neutral and she is well separated from it. 

As has been stated, the hair across her face doesn't work. 

Her soft make-up looks very nice, but she could have used a little darker eye make-up. Eyeliner under her eyes would have framed them and made them stand out better. Her eyes seem to be receding into her face. They need to stand out.

She has quite a bit of headroom. You could crop a little off the top.

You could crop a bit off the left side. You want to compositionally balance the left and right sides of the photograph. The compositional "rule" for this suggests that you position the tip of the subject's nose in the vertical center of the photograph.

I would have posed her body at an angle to the camera. It usually will appear thinner and more feminine, graceful and elegant.

Your advertising (www.ivanmiadenov.com) is not part of the photograph. Your name could be properly placed on a mat surrounding the photograph. Any advertising would be better placed on the back of the photograph.

Nice shot,

Mark

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Hi Mark, thanks for your words. I think,conversely, that hair crossing her mouth are perfect, and photo has a natural feeling with it. But I agree with you about position of body.....a little angle of it would be definitely better. Thank you one more time, Ivan

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nice dreamy effect image of this beautiful model with her interesting visual contact - I guess it would better for me to go to the next image B4 she hypnotize me with those eyes! ;)
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Great portrait! I agreed that the top portion of the image can be a bit  cropped. This will bring more attention to her eyes and face. Like this, my eyes keeps sliding to her braid and the flower. Thank you!

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This really is a beautifully composed image that could grace any bridal magazine or for that matter, fashion magazine.

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