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Splendid in Red - wrinkle free


andrzejp

f 9; 1/200; ISO100; 160mm


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Splendid indeed Andrew,excellent work,beautifull pose,top marks,Harry

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I like your crop.  One thing I might suggest though, remove the vertical wrinkle in the fabric to the left of her. 

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Lacey,

 

Thanks for you visit and for your comment. I am not sure what you are referring too.

Regards,

 

Andrew

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There are many wrinkles that I can see in the backdrop, especially when viewed larger.  The most distracting one to me is a vertical line is midway between her face and the edge of the frame.  There is also a horizontal fold wrinkle that runs near the top of her head.  I'm not sure of the material you used.  I can tell that it had been previously folded though.  I'm not sure if any of it would show up in a print.  If it did it would probably have to be a larger print...  It's just something I can see with my screen. 

Otherwise, I really like your lighting.  No harsh shadows.  Soft expression.  Well done.

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Lacey,

 

You must have a Sony monitor since thy are very sensitive to very slight color variations. I replaced the image with a new one with is guarantee to be wrinkle free. It may take a day or two before actual replacement takes place.

 

Thank a lot for your diligence.

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Andrew, it is a beautiful model with the red scarf. Well executed with the right light. I think that another possibility can be to  crop a bit from the L and make is a square. what do you think?

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Andrew,

They call a horizontal crop, a "landscape" crop. and a vertical one a "portrait" crop.  When you use a horizontal crop with a portrait you end up with empty space at one or both sides.

Regards,

Jerry Matchett

 

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Pnina,

 

Not many people like square pictures but I tried and it works wonderful for this one. Thanks a lot for your visit.

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Preciosa modelo y magnifica expresion con una sensacional luz y tonos asi como un excelente detalle. ++

Saludos -Tolo.

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