My neice

Hi, this is my first submission. Any advice or opinion would be

greatly appreciated.

Nice, but the face looks slightly overexposed.

i really like this one. the framing of hte bars of hte merry-go-round is great. it also works well with the placement of the subject's head as the focal point in the upper left third (good use of hte rule of thirds), the direction in which she is looking as well as the direction of the light. excellent photo.

move in closer, get rid of the bar in the foreground and this would be a decent portrait.