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a girl waiting for someone in harajuku, tokyo.

I enjoy the idea of this picture, but I find the dark area in the lower left a bit distracting. I want it to be a darker tone there but not black. It pulls the frame down too much. The subject, however, is very interesting, and I love the out of the ordinary framing.

The frame does seem too busy, but I like the original perspective. The studded belts she is wearing gives the viewer some ideas of what this girl might look like (her style, fashions, hair, etc), but her identity is still a mystery at the same time.