Counter at a fast food place

Please comment on the contrast level & composition of this pic. taken

at the counter of a fast food place. Would a color version look

better?

Interesting. It works for me because the feet are not attached to faces, the woman's feet are quite expressive as are her shoes. And the whole scene doesn't depend on the title (based on location) you have given it; it stands by itself.

I like this. It makes me wonder about the relationship between the two characters. I think this shot would benefit from a more ambiguous title, leaving more to the imagination. Nice work.