In hospital II

Any comments much appreciated.

It's a cute baby photo and well-exposed, but her right eye's much sharper than her left eye, and your framing chopped off her right elbow but left extra whitespace to her left--those are clear errors. A tilt of the camera may have addressed both. Personally, I would close down 1/3rd stop to simplify focus and to see more of what she's holding in her hands, but that could be debated. I like the vignette.

HER right eye etc, etc...

 

Apologies for the 'clear errors'.