Label Systems...

Critiques appreciated...

Hi Jennifer,

I'm a huge fan of industrial mess and I feel excited to discover such an awful environment. Your postprocessing fits perfectly and your composition is very good considering the cluttered scene. I feel a slight unbalance between left and right sides because the leading lines suggest that the aperture in the background should be in the middle of the frame and the empty wall above the stairs increases this feeling. You could fix the perspective and the small barrel distortion even if it's not really a problem.

Best regards, J.

I also am intrigued with industrial images and I really like this one, I’m not sure that taking a step to the left would improve the image as Jean-Pierre had mentioned. I like it as is. I am curious about the title...

Yes, it is an awful environment very well presented. Nice work!