janc 0 Posted October 6, 2009 Thanks in advanced for your welcome critiques. My best regards. Link to comment
Saadsalem 74 Posted October 6, 2009 great shot,masterly captured,with fine tones,Anon,7/6,be well. Link to comment
robwilson 0 Posted October 8, 2009 Hi there! This is a nice shot as is, but to make it an excellent shot it is lacking one thing for me: some human interest. In my mind's eye, a well placed movement blurred or silhoetted sharp figure would really bring this picture to life. It is still a nice shot, don't get me wrong, but I think you should head back and hang around to get a shot with a person in there! I hope that's useful! All the best, Rob Link to comment
janc 0 Posted October 8, 2009 Dear friends. Antonio, Saad, Rob. Thanks a lot to stop by this shot. Rob: I'm agreed with your proposal, but in this case I was waiting and old woman to go out of frame to shot this one, I wanted to play and compose with those handrail lines, if I let a person in the shot it shall be a completely diferente shot. My best regards. Link to comment
robwilson 0 Posted October 8, 2009 Hi Jose, I just wanted to add something to illustrate my point. Here is a link to a fabulous Andreas Gursky photo where he has used symmetry and repetition. http://markelt.files.wordpress.com/2009/03/gurskyshanghai.jpg However, what makes this a special shot is the two small pieces of humanity. If you are able to reproduce your picture with a person in it, I would love to see it! (Please drop me a line and let me know!) All the best, Rob Link to comment
olafdevries 0 Posted October 11, 2009 Fine balance in this graphical meeting. :) Abrazo..! Link to comment
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