john_langley2 0 Posted October 2, 2009 Comments and critiques are welcome ,Thanks for your time -john Link to comment
charliemastrovich 0 Posted October 2, 2009 There isn't anything that draws you in. Too hi-key and pastel. Needs a point of attention. Link to comment
jerrymat 5 Posted October 3, 2009 It is, indeed, extremely high key. I suggest just a little bit of adjusting to make some of the shadowed forms a little darker to give contrast. Jerry Link to comment
graneenie 571 Posted October 4, 2009 I like it too. Extremely subtle, but it made me want to see it larger. Link to comment
stp 6 Posted October 5, 2009 What "draws me in" is the image in its entirety. I don't see the need for a particular element to do that; instead, I'm drawn by the soft contours and colors, the gestalt of John's image. Link to comment
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