The new Puppy

Did I capture the moment, does the expression on my Dad's face add

anything to the photo?

It's not the right moment. The right hand is awkwardly positioned, it should have been turned with palm inside. The puppy is not looking at you dad, your dad is not looking at puppy. The closed eyes don't go well with expression on the face. The background is too bright and distracting. The composition on the whole is bad. The picture doesn't show the wamrth between a pet and a man. Good luck next time!