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Great shot Victoria lovey tones and lovely expressions on their faces

Wow- great portrait! Tremendous expression on both of thier faces, and nice to see an image where they are not smiling for the camera. Their looks stop the viewer in his or her tracks and warn them to keep their distance as somewhat unwelcomed intruders into the moment. It leaves many questions for the viewer to ponder. Great black and white work too! A very refreshing image-

Mark

Beautiful expressions and subjects!

I like their facial expressions, the contrasts and your composition.

Also a WOW from my side - both captured so well - so strong - Congratulation!

excellent shot.... i like their looking and pose.it cropped very good by perfect tone and contrast.well done

 

Best Regards Hamed

great black and white composition

 

incredible use of light, both expressions are well captured

 

nice work Victoria

 

take care

mg

This image has perfect quality, the B&W absolutely amazing, it so clear and with good contrast.

The pictures has interesting crop and i think this is another reason why it so interesting.

Really Really Good work.

Beautiful....this is wonderful...maybe just a bit more of Mom's head...I really like this image. Wonderful tones and textures, excellent composition and the pose/expressions are just great. Well done.

Victoria,

 

Two very nice looking girls -- one very cute, the other very beautiful. You have focused very well on their eyes. They have great skin tones and complexions. The taller one has applied her make-up very well. The contrast is excellent. There is wonderful detail in the lights and darks. You couldn't print a black and white much better than this one. They have very nice specular highlights on their lips. The background is nicely out of focus. All attention goes to the two girls. They have wonderful hand positions and expressions. They both have very good eye contact with the camera (viewer).

 

I don't know why you would want to crop into the older girl's head? It really hurts this picture. With the intensity of the little girl's expression and the older girl holding her so protectively, there must be something to be afraid of in front of them. There is much tension showing in their pose and expressions. This looks more like a movie still for a spooky movie than a portrait to me. To be sure -- a very good movie still.

 

You have two catch lights in each eye. One catch light per eye is preferred. If you have multiple catch lights, only one should be dominant. The ideal position for a catch light is at the 10 or 2 o'clock position. To achieve this your main light should be above and to the side of your subject. You do not want a catch light below the pupil.

 

This is a wonderful photograph. I just can't quite make out its purpose.

 

Good shot,

 

Mark

Sincere thanks for the critique and the advices!

 

Mark, this portrait is from the collection of two people together: friends, lovers, spouses, children and parents... I chose this composition for more tension. It is a portrait of mother and daughter.

It is one of my favourite work overall, I've seen in this portal. Excellent

There is something about this portrait that speaks ' Suspicious by nature '. Excellent expressive capsulation.