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It's a good shot imo, and close to very good. I like the composition very much and the tones too. I wish there would be just a tad less light on the hat - minor burning will do fine -, and I wish the model had slightly smaller breasts. It's not my taste for women that's in question here, but just the fact that the jacket falls a bit odd here, a bit too much "in the face", or extreme and arranged for the photo. A bit more subtle was better imo. Erotism is a very subtle thing in fact...

Side comment: if you just crop off the boobs, to keep aperfect square, I really love the shot. Reagards.

Is there too much breast as Mark suggests? Not enough? Are the

colouring and exposure to your liking? What would you do different.

As Mark has all ready noted, in this type of photo there's a fine

line behind too much and not enough, and that's a pretty subjective

line. I feel the photo works as is, while using the cropping

suggestion of Marks' creates a completely different photo, one I

also like by the way, it's just not what I was aiming for.

 

Comments?

I do agree with Marc. This is a very eye catching photo, but as is, all of the energy is concentrated on the breasts. Cropping them off completely makes a good portrait too; if you close the shirt a little more, the angles would draw the eye down beneath the frame causing the imagination to go to work. Or, just leaving the top line of them to make it more obvious...

It is an excellent photo. The attention is first drawn to the breasts and then her half face. The jacket and hat act as a frame. It is very nice.

I don't mind the boobs so much in this photo as I do the wardrobe. The jacket reminds me of something from an 80's hairband music video. I mean, how often do you see people wearing jean jackets with nothing underneath? Besides that, I rather enjoy the model's suppleness, and the light and tone are excellent. Some texture or tone(besides black) would probably help in the background to make more intimate as well. cheers.

I'm a hot-blooded American man, I like the breasts. But, it was the photograph in its whole that drew me in for a closer look. I have to take a break from over-analysis on this one and just say that I find it an appealing photograph with great tones, textures and contrast.

I love this !

Great photo. I like everything about it. Nice work.

I admit that the breasts caught my attention first off, and they're quite nice. But in the end, I also agree with Marc; the way it is, I find my gaze stuck in her cleavage - this is not because it is cleavage, but I guess all lines kind of point that way, as does her (inferred) gaze. I would crop the bottom, leaving just a hint of cleavage.