Firemen at work

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This is a well executed shot but it is to close, you need more of the scene in to tell the story you other fire shot is better but this one is just too close. It is admirable to get close to the action but sometimes you need to step back to tell more of a story . You also have to bear in mind that in newsprint you will lose a lot of the detail you have here making it harder to tell what's going on.

I took the liberty of looking at the rest of your portfolio and it is superb you have a great eye,keep up the good work.

regards

Steve