John Peri 1,032 Posted September 5, 2009 A wonderful blend of tones and colours, the expression of the model too. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted September 5, 2009 Tore, She is a pretty girl. You have focused very well on her eyes. She has very good catch lights. Her skin tone and make-up is very good. The composition is good and she has good eye contact with the camera (viewer). The background and the color of the background works well with the subject.Everything is well integrated to tell her story. If her hand was turned at an angle it would look thinner, more feminine and more graceful. The bright white "blouse?" under her shirt draws my attention away from her face. The vertical lines on the background should be vertical. They are at an angle. Nice shot, Mark Link to comment
tore 10 Posted September 6, 2009 Than you for your kind feedback! Mark, Thank you very much, the white t shirt under her shirt was nice in real life but in a photograph where the whole tone is brown, it will be an eye-catch, I realize this now, I'll think about it for next time. Best regards Tore Link to comment
chrisr1 0 Posted September 6, 2009 Beautiful portrait, I like the tone and you capture an excellent expression. Beautiful lighting. Best regards Christine Link to comment
wogears 186 Posted September 7, 2009 Concur on the white 'flash', but I like her strong pose and expression, and the slightly disordered hair. Very good modeling on the face. Link to comment
lopezslf 0 Posted September 8, 2009 This is great portrait, very good exposition. I like the color tones on it. The only detail, it is the one that already has been mentioned. The white part on her. Other than that very good. Regards, Luis Link to comment
mbh 0 Posted February 17, 2010 Beautiful girl, strong pose, excellent composition. You've created a very attractive portrait. Link to comment
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