siarhei 0 Posted September 2, 2009 feedback on composition will be helpful, Thank you Link to comment
rina 0 Posted September 2, 2009 I would suggest to straighten the horizont .I like the light and shadow play in the foreground. Link to comment
pisq 0 Posted September 3, 2009 I agree with Rina, it is not plainly obvious, but once you tune in you can't let it go. There seems to be no clear subject, perhaps the senset, or the grouping of trees in the upper third. That area is probably too busy, and perhaps even the foreground. I would look to simpliy the wooded area somehow, and keep attention on the sun setting, Link to comment
raymondborg 0 Posted September 4, 2009 Superb lighting and beautiful colours. The horizon is slightly inclined. Congrats. Link to comment
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