Jack McRitchie 150 Posted August 29, 2009 This is a compelling picture, both in terms of construction and story. It seems the kind of scene that would be key thematic image of an intelligent movie. Link to comment
human images 4 Posted August 30, 2009 this is not the first time Jack gets on my nerves Wieslaw. I swear I was gonna comment precisely the same way, word per word per word, everything he said above, every single word he wrote, the nuanced allusion to film, etc. . . But once again he beat me to it. Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted August 31, 2009 I like all your last 3 uploads,but this is really special.The jaxtaposition of two kinds of movements....The differences of shadow kinds and placements on the scene. Very nice timing and interesting composition, as well as B/W execution. Link to comment
gordonjb 10,860 Posted August 31, 2009 First off let me take this opportunity to berate Jack for being too insightful and too fast.... just kidding of course, however truth be told Jack does know how to pick them. A person could follow him around PN to find the most compelling images. I like that the actual physical man is darker than his shadow. The three other human shadows seem somehow sinister to me, I think this arises from those people being implied but not illuminated, lurking in the shadows as it were. The static shadow cast upon the moving vehicle sets up an uneasy relationship which pulls my eye to that spot the moment I look at the photo. This image is a great launching point for the imagination -- an open ended story with a multitude of possible plot progressions. Link to comment
aarkp 2 Posted August 31, 2009 a speeding bus at pedestrian crossing... the only real man's shadow isolated on the blur of the rushing vehicle passing-by... three shadows observing... this is 'seeing' and this is composition! a graphic story... Link to comment
luis.miro 0 Posted September 1, 2009 Wieslaw, after all those comments I can only add congrats and thanks! Congrats for your talent and good eye...and thanks for sharing and for provoking our imagination....outstanding! Kind regards, Luis Link to comment
andrea-de-bonis 6 Posted September 2, 2009 sad but optimist. better than a book... wieslaw, a great photo. Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted September 2, 2009 for sharing your feedback. Like your sense of humor here, must admit life isn't easy for Jack here on PN, for all the support, comments, works he shares with us only nagging and grumbling in return:-}. Jack – your comment partly explains why I first wanted to title this shot 'Matrix', was my gut reaction, I guess, to b&w conversion which gave indeed a movie feel here, as I thought 'Matrix' somehow farfetched I quitted the idea and decided on 'Isolation' as a safer choice which conveys my main impression about the feelings here. Like however that you and your friends refer to movie in your comments. Carlos – thank you for letting me know you are of the same mind ...;-} Pnina – glad you point out the timing here, luckily the bus was the only component on the move. Alon – nice to know you like it. Gordon – welcome, one of the doubts about this shot was whether all the 'effects' in the picture wouldn't stop viewers from getting deeper into its subject, it's reassuring you pay attention not only to composition and tricks here but also see the potential for imagination. Rajat – couldn't agree more, the man and his shadow look indeed isolated, though physically close to the commuters on the bus and the three shadows, he seems to be far away from them. Luis – welcome, believing Gordon I hope you'll enjoy developing the scene in your imagination:-} Andrea – a big thank you for finding optimism in this story:-} My best regards to you all. Link to comment
kaushikphotography 0 Posted September 3, 2009 The most artistic presentation of the day to me. The effect of the running motion along with the shadows and the lonely man in an outstanding tonal is amazing. All the best. Rgds. Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted September 4, 2009 when a photographer like you comment on my shot using the word 'artistic', it's got a special meaning to me. Thanks a lot, regards. Link to comment
celasun 0 Posted September 5, 2009 This is certainly among the best images I have seen lately.As a late commenter, I have nothing to add to the excellent comments above, which I read with pleasure. I guess, of the three shadows on the right, yours was the one in the middle. Right? Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted September 6, 2009 thank you for visiting. Bulent – I took this shot while being on a city walk with my two nephews (8 and 16) and indeed the three shadows are just our reflections, it's logical mine should be the one in the middle as it looks like a shadow of a photographer in action but actually it isn't, belongs to the younger boy who lay his head on a little metal barrier to watch all the traffic below. It's misleading I know but my shadow is on the right, I had wanted all the three heads to be reflected on a white stripe of the zebra crossing so I put my camera on the barrier, prepared the composition and then lifted my head and waited for the right moment. The middle, as if 'headless' shadow spoils the composition a bit imho but your question makes me realize it may also give, without my intent, the opportunity to play with a viewer:-}. Thanks a lot for your visit and question. Gunnar – thank you for your kind words. Best regards to you. Link to comment
michaellinder 16,613 Posted September 8, 2009 Brilliant, insightful work . . . I will bow to the experts who already have posted comments. They, as a whole, speak for me as well, although they didn't know that. My best, michael Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted September 9, 2009 thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. Warm regards. Link to comment
hsp 0 Posted September 13, 2009 great shot by excellent exposure and composition.well done Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted September 14, 2009 thank you, appreciate your visit, best regards. Link to comment
elportebonheur 0 Posted September 27, 2009 Double underline the comments above. Amazing capture, excellent converted and presented. Big compliments - El Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted September 27, 2009 thank you for your visit and your kind words, nice to hear you enjoy this photo. My best regards. Link to comment
3m 0 Posted June 16, 2012 Wieslaw, Just in case you happen to be on line, I wanted to let you know that I absolutely love your above photo & I'm dumbfounded as to why I never clicked on it before.. It has a cinematic feel to it indeed & contains a great story..! Wonderful work, an immediate favorite. Hope that you are doing very well. (and keep on clicking!) You are one of the few people whose presence I surely miss on this site. Kind regards to you, Marjolein Link to comment
_bb 0 Posted September 23, 2015 somehow - by lack of consistency, I reckon - I missed this photography.it is between photography and visual art, almost a set-up. I struggle with its prevailing mode, yet I do find it good. what is the eclipsed ellipse in middle please? Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted October 31, 2015 thank you for your comment. I'm sorry for my being late. Wish you all the best whatever you do and wherever you are:-) Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted October 31, 2015 you probably mean a blurred wheel of a passing city bus. Thank you for your feedback. Best regards to you. Link to comment
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