aarkp 2 Posted August 10, 2009 seeing this full screen on my monitor was a real pleasure... i felt as if i were in the passage watching the boy racing away for me... felt a great sense of depth and proportion... the empty street interestingly with just the racing boy added tension... then i spied a lock on the grilled shutter at extreme left which suggested a shut shop, read with the closed shutters on the windows one could deduce its a holiday... there seems to be a hint of a light fixture on the ceiling of the passage, a ribbed white fitting... seems a fitting caption for this immensely satisfying photograph... marvelous nuanced toning... great to have you back, Wieslaw... Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted August 13, 2009 thanks a lot for your visit and your observant comment, it was Saturday 5.50 pm so the most shops had already been closed as you've cleverly deduced. About the light fitting, hm, I've just looked at the original and I'm not sure if there's really something on the ceiling (see the attached photo). However, the ceiling on this b&w version is not as clean as it's on the color one, probably because I worked here on selections to correct the perspective, and any distortions may just be the result of some inaccuracy in this job. Highly appreciate your support, best regards. Link to comment
diego bardone 0 Posted August 13, 2009 You should come over there my dear Wieslaw and see how streets are at 5.30 pm...eheheheheheh!! Jokes aside this is an absolutely awesome shot, dark and clear masses fit perfectly...the young "alone" biker is fantastic. A great shot! Take care Diego Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted August 14, 2009 Seeing your (partly humorous) comment really made my day:-}. Thanks a lot, warm regards. Link to comment
tonmestrom 4 Posted August 15, 2009 on the other hand you could try 6 AM, I regularly do. I really like the see-trough at the right as it provides extra info about the environment and you included that in your composition effectively. I also like how the darks and the lines guide us towards that boy. And of course your expertly processed b_w tops it off. Link to comment
barbaracorvino 0 Posted August 19, 2009 I like this street scene, well framed subject. Ciao. Barbara Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted August 19, 2009 thank you for your feedback. Ton, 6AM? Honestly, rarely I shoot so early, nothing left but to give it a try:-} Barbara, glad you like this composition. Best regards to you. Link to comment
andrea-de-bonis 6 Posted August 21, 2009 nothing to do, you dont loose a photo, never. you here added at the "usual" tunnel a large window thar gives us 2 visions, inside and outside, and you show also the town, more empty than the tunnel. and a little stupid thing: the perfection of the shirt, a little jewel in this photo Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted August 22, 2009 thank you, very interesting to read your comment, the scenes with tunnels are quite common and there's always a risk of producing something close to banal, the second opening and the fluttering shirt, as you notice, are important for this composition and I'm glad this photo works for you. Best regards. Link to comment
lliebl 5 Posted August 25, 2009 Those who have commented previously stated so well how effective this image is in both color and b&w. My compliments! ~~~~L Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted August 25, 2009 thank you for your visit and comment on both versions:-}. Best regards. Link to comment
Jack McRitchie 150 Posted August 29, 2009 I really like the "split screen" feeling of this photo. The two openings seem to give two separate and distinct takes on the same location, each perfectly frames by its own arch. The fact that you recognized the creative potential of the scene attests to your photographic awareness of your surroundings. Link to comment
wieslawmamon 0 Posted August 29, 2009 appreciate your visit, thank you for commenting, best regards. Link to comment
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