michael_zellhorn 0 Posted March 2, 2001 I love the way you got the light to fall on her. Link to comment
kevin_kolosky 2 Posted March 2, 2001 Very nice. There is only one little thing that bothers me about this portrait. That is that one eye is fairly open and the other is fairly shut. If they were both the same I would be saying Wonderful. Kevin Link to comment
justthings 0 Posted March 2, 2001 I like this .. its simple, evocative. I second Kevin's comment.... though I think the one eye open but is cast too deep in shadow thus it's appearance of being shut. Link to comment
michael_goode1 0 Posted April 22, 2001 beautiful lighting and posing. However, something about the model's lips bothers me, and that really ruins what is otherwise a superb photo. Also, I'll echo kevin with her eyes. Link to comment
pd 0 Posted April 23, 2001 Kevin.if you look at her eyelids,they are even straight across,both open.the right one however is completely cast in shadow,my only contention with this photo.gorgeous model by the way. Link to comment
pavel_drobnych 0 Posted June 5, 2001 ...shadows from nose and especially leaps would be less deep. Link to comment
alan_little1 0 Posted July 20, 2001 Beautiful. Very striking picture. Lovely lighting, good composition. Nitpicks - I agree with Pavel that the deep nose and lip shadows could do with a tiny bit of fill lighting. And the perspective makes the front arm too big in relation to the face - maybe shoot from a little further away with a slighlty longer lens? Link to comment
rameses__ii 0 Posted August 9, 2001 Love the lighting, but her left eye, (our right) almost looks bruised. Link to comment
modestos_modestou 0 Posted July 29, 2003 Great shot ! Disagree about the lips I think they are sensuous, Did you also try a shot with her looking at the camera ? I think it would be a very striking pose. Beautiful model so we need to see her eyes. By the way Rob you rated my "The Absent Friend" 1-1 .maybe you would have given me 2-2 if it was in Black and White !! Link to comment
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