gerrymorgan 0 Posted August 1, 2009 This is a nice idea. I like the position of the patch of clouds at the top relative to the moon. And the lines of light at the bottom do a good job of isolating the tree while also drawing the viewer's attention to it. The problem that I have with this composition is that there are two areas of interest at opposite ends of a panorama, and not much in between. My eye jumps from one to the other, and this does not keep my attention within the photo. In a perfect world, perhaps the clouds would be different and act as a conduit for the eye from one end of the photo to the other and back again. Alternatively, perhaps the hard jump of the eye from tree to moon and back would work better if the masking on the moon were more carefully executed — at the moment, it makes the moon look slightly eccentric at top-right. A more perfect circle would contrast better with the shape of the tree.This is reminiscent of your panorama with the sun and a tree, and that composition works better for me because the compositional elements engage the viewer better (this viewer, at least). Link to comment
BelaMolnar 2 Posted August 2, 2009 Excellent image, perfect composition, and I like, you don't follow the standard 1/3 rules, witch is just a guidance for beginners to try to follow some rules for composition. Bravo Iacob Andrei. Cheers; Bela Link to comment
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