mdc002 3 Posted July 24, 2009 I like the intensity of the subject but the background over the model's left shoulder looks a little blown out. I would also try cropping out the building to see it it improves the composition. Link to comment
evan.lavine 0 Posted July 24, 2009 Hi MIke, Good suggestions. Yeah, it was blown out (shot in the harshest of sun with no filter on me lens. I left the building in cause I liked the two windows and my models two eye - thought there was some kind of haunting feel to it, but I am sometimes crazy...I will crop it and see if i like. Thank you so much for you suggestions amigo, evan! Link to comment
giuseppe_pasquali 0 Posted July 28, 2009 An emotional portrait, really like it, Giuseppe Link to comment
evan.lavine 0 Posted July 28, 2009 thank you G...it is hard to do wrong with my dear lizyvette ; ) peace to you today,evan Link to comment
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