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I've asked for this one to be critiqued, but it is part of a folder

set, so you can view the whole set and comment on that if you wish.

These are quick test shots that I will reshoot, hopefully improved.

... essential & aesthetic... I like it, Hi....

I like the simple lines of the composition and the way you have emphasized just the white lines and curves (not the body of the guitar). I find the brightest part (curve bottom 1/3) to be a bit soft (either not focussed or some sort of glow applied ? or are my eyes just tired today?). I'd prefer it just sharper, in fact I think the centre of that curve should be the sharpest part of the image with focus falling away top and bottom.

Thank you for your comments on the focus. It was done quick. I saw the light coming in my living room window, through a black cloth down, and just shot a bunch with the auto focus. It's always good to know if something bothers people, cuz I tend to see what I want to in my own work. I'll do more again, with the same compositions and be more selective about focus. Get more depth. There are no effects applied other than darkening some cloth folds, the light on the instrument was just beautiful.