Suspended in time

Where is this located? I like these nature swimming area shots.

I took this picture in Fingerlakes, New York. This area is beautiful, the people are kind, and the scenery is gorgeous.

Please comment on the angels or whether this pic needs to be cropped?

Personally, I would have moved forward and laid down on top of the rocks, shooting through the spaces in the brush and avoided having them in the frame. The extreme exposure on the rocks is pretty distracting. I tried playing around with cropping in photoshop but found it difficult to eliminate (with only cropping) the distraction and keeping the focus of the photo. Here's one attempt w/ a simple crop...

Yeah, you are right Rob, I wanted to lay on the rocks, but it's a really steep drop and I really didn't know those kids were gonna jump. I was so unprepare, I just grab and snap. Thanks for your input.