Christine

Please I would like to have your critique...Please Please!!!!!!

Hi friend. When comparing this image to other images you took before, i see improvement. The fact that you are taking such portraits with the new 24-70mm f2.8 lens, i'm sure this is giving you better results. I feel that her eyes are dominant, very effective, good sharpening and good tonalities. The use of a green cloth helped a lot to outstand her eyes. But take care to the tonalities on her face. I have mixed feelings on how you worked and edited on her skin tones. Apart from that, i would have worked on different face positions (and for that i'm sure you have other photos) Why i'm saying that? Because i feel one of her nostrils is dominant compared to the other nostril; i.e. the position of the nose is not that favourable. Another thing i would have done was removing her necklace. Say to yourself :- Is it helping the image? Hope i was of help

A pretty face with sparkling eyes! A nice portrait. I would prefer to see more light on her hair though.

 

Regards,

 

Jerry

Great Capture...

Sincerly, Shenandoah