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thank you for taking the time to critique this photo.

It looks as though the DOF is slightly too shallow; the child in the back is out of focus. Otherwise it would be an excellent photo.

Good exposure, poor composition. Beautiful kids but the smaller one is blurry and there are too many distractions. Because of the DOF it makes you wonder if the child in the foreground is the focus. If so the DOF is not shallow enough. If not, the DOF should have been shot at 8

Couple of buddies posing for a quick shot. I think this one is going to be enjoyed for a lot more years than most of our stuff, a great capture of a moment in their young lives. Just enough sharpness on the front boy to give the image a focal point while not losing his friend in a blur. Maybe crop in to his left shoulder to lose the details at the top right that compete for attention.