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constructive critisism please.only an enthusiastic amateur with a

capital A.

This is a very nice picture with full of actions. I wish the angle can be moved up a little bit, so not only the grass at the bottom can be reduced, but also the boy's head won't be cut.

I greatly appreciate how sharp the image is as well as the depth of the colors, but I have to agree with the previous comment that there might be a better angle so to see all of the "sir." I feel like you were caught in between two prime lenses (based upon your details, I know that to not be the case), trying to decide between a tight shot showing the struggle of the scrum (longer lens) and a wider shot showing the whole pack and the scrum halfs. I think you have the right idea for the composition, but you were a bit short on focal length. If I were you, I would give this image a second effort, but next time wait until the scrum is closer to the sideline. I think you'll be thrilled with what you get. Also, you might try to get a few line-out shots...I find those to come out great. Good luck.

good sports photo!