single photos "Darker View of Youth"

Opinions, Please!!! I altered this black and white photo by using

the style, solarize, and then went back and painted in the eyes. I

really would love to hear what you think of this. Thanks for your

comments in advance.

Congratulations for trying something different. A more dramatic or sinister pose would heighten the effect; she looks a little to innocent to be in a dark mood. Overall, I like the effect.

I might of added a bit of contrasting color to the lips, as well. Very nice image, though. You chose a nice color blue - nicely subtle.

A beautifully styled picture that goes somewhere new. Everything seems to fade in right, and the lack of a background comes out as beneficial... good pick. Maybe a little more contrast in the hair to the right side of the frame, but then again every photo gets a nit-pick :/

This technique is old and tired and very cliche. It is more of an excercise for Photography 101 students so that they can see the effect that light has in the darkroom. It doesn't make a bad picture better. I am not saying that the original was bad because I haven't seen it. Painting the eyes blue in PS doesn't help it either. This seems more like an excercise in "what can I do to make something interesting out of this very average portrait". You have some excellent work in your portfolio, but this isn't one of them.

Exellent as I think the concept is great and the print well done.

I agree with Scott. You have better work in your portfolio. The effects here are far too amateurish. I do appreciate your attempt, and your willingness to experiment. Through experimentation come great ideas. Keep them coming. --Rick