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I am pretty new to photography and this is my first real try using off

camera flash. I didn't realize the ISO was 1600 when shooting as I had

been shooting around 800.. that caused a little noise and I am aware

of that :( Any C and C is appreciated.

I like the starkness of the flash and the balance of lights and darks in the portrait - they create some nice geometry around her face, and the straight-on shot is perfect for the geometric feeling created by the shadows and background-

Mark

I agree with Mark... full range of tones from black to white and i like the framing. Though I like the stark lighting, I might have gone just a little softer; the dark shadows to the left of her nose seem a little harsh, but this is personal preference. Her expression seems a little mischievous and makes for a great portrait.

Overall a nice portrait...I'm sure if I thought about it long enough I could list several things I would improve, but there is nothing glaringly wrong here. Your compositional elements are good, nice tones and textures, nice expression and eye contact...I think you pulled it off nicely. Regards.