Lovely Expression

Your comments are welcome

Good expression, good hairlighting on her lustrous locks and nice play of light on her face, Rafael. I am not as keen about the hands in the pockets detail of course...we always never know what to do with hands and people tend to want to hide them I guess...A good job overall and a pretty subject well displayed and nice lighting and crisp as I like to see young faces. I even like the blue filtered backlight on the left muslin hanging.it plays well with the satin blue blouse..Nice job. gs

Beautiful model, excellent light, great color mixture. I agree, I dont like the hand in the pocket but I am at a loss for what to do with them for this shot. My first thought was behind the back, then maybe just cropping up to the waist might be my suggestion. Also I am a little distracted by the blue spot at the upper left. I think this could be more in the middle of the background. The left is blue and the right is gray, if the blue would be in the middle right behind her head, then it would flow into gray going down. It looks kind of like her body is the divider of the color.

 

Just some thoughts.

 

Matt