levi_benkert 0 Posted November 10, 2002 The lighting seems to be ok but tell me what I could have done better? Link to comment
kezia 0 Posted November 10, 2002 I find the exposure, colour and mood very nice. I'm not sure about the sharpness of the image, but I'm not viewing it on a very good screen so can't be sure I'm right on that. The ripples in the foreground spreading out to the calmer water beyond are lovely, but the composition, with the grasses cut off by the edge of the picture in all directions, give it an enclosed feel to me. If it were me I would experiment with the composition, first trying to include the water beyond the further grasses to give the calming feeling of it going on for ever, second coming in closer for an abstract composition of vertical grasses. I also find the one lighter piece of grass at LRC foreground distracting. Link to comment
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