Ana M. - Waching The Leafs Fall Down

Comments, critiques and rating are appreciated.

A lovely photograph that proves you don't need a lot of expensive lighting to create a touching portrait. Nice work.

Strong pose and the lighting on the face is good. Placing her eyes centrally is not so good and the black space behind her adds nothing to the composition. Try cropping to a vertical format by cutting out the right side of the image half-way beyond her lit cheek and the right edge. You will see the composition strengthen.