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Cheers Giovanni

I am a fan of out of focus /blurry pics, but is not sure if this one works. Maybe a little bit zoomed in and one wouldn't immediately see that its a building. I dont think the leaves in the foreground add anyting and detracts from the focus which is the geometry of the building ....... but, nicely spotted anyway...

I find the image soft in focus, too tightly cropped, and generally uninteresting with the head-on frontal view. It would be helpful to know what your objectives were when shooting this particular image and the camera/lens you were using.. It has many attributes of an image shot with a pin-hole camera using the wrong aperture. Other of your portfolio works are also soft,and quite grainy, but at least they show some interesting architectual angles. Check the cleanliness of your lens as well as the camera's focusing scale for accuracy. As for a critique, this image has too many artistic and technical flaws to get a good starting point. Use this as a starting point and learn all about your camera and what makes an interesting image. If you like architecture, go to the local library and view some architectural digest magazine images to get a better feel for what it takes to make good images. This image is one you probably won't see in one of those magazines.

But with a bit of effort, one day you may even make the cover shot! Keep trying.

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