claire Claire 01

I like the framing...although, I would have liked to see the lower and right brick work straighter...and her left hand fingers included in the shot.

I like that her right foot looks like it is nearly touching the edge of the shot...makes it look as thought she is resting her foot on an invisible wall.

I miss that there is no catchlight in her eyes as well.

I would have photo shopped the station wagon out from behind her left foot.

I like the shot over all...just constructive critism.

Thanks for sharing.