single photos Corsetry

Hi Charlotte. I see this is your first shot posted here on photo net. Welcome! I can see that the focus of the shot is the corset, and maybe the fact that this is announced as a self portrait may detract from the focus on the corset.

I like the high key effect, and the dual image. One thing that may help is to brighten the lighting on your thighs as the slight shadow looks almost noisy in the context of the high key feel. I think you have made a great beginning here, keep going and keep posting!