Larkin's Eyes

Let me know what you think...

Except you cannot see her eyes; the face is too dark. It looks as thought your camera metered off the reflected light from the windows in the building.

I agree. If you want to concentrate on her eyes as a subject you should frame them in close enough so that they are the subject and are illuminated enough to see them well. This one looks more like it should be titled "girl with bicycle".

why did you title it larkin's eyes

.........my last name by the way

Larkin is her name.