portraits Edith portrait 1

New to photography and eager to learn

lovely. the only thing I might change would be the specular high lights on her lips. That is a very minor point though. Hope she is happy with this.

 

I disagree with the previous poster, I like the lip highlights. I also like the use of shallow depth of field, and the overall composition and contrast. What I like least is the sharp line of shadow cutting off her jaw.

I went thru your folder and found that this is the best image so far. Your model works well with the camera and the images are very nice. I dont like the croping of this one, but other than that, its perfect. Id like to invite you to look at some of my work, its by no means great, but its still mine, lol.

NIce pose.

I d like it