godfather 0 Posted August 31, 2008 Follow the light and you will find the way.Like the way you used those harsh shadows in the bottom, it amplifies more that upper section. Almost the way that lost your title in there first. Well done Jeff. Warm rgs Tero. Link to comment
amalsircar 2 Posted August 31, 2008 Absolutely stunning image too,Jeff. Tero has beautifully said,"Follow the light, and you will find the way". This contrast of light & shade and the composition is very appealing to me.Where is that smoke coming from? Link to comment
Donna Stavis 0 Posted August 31, 2008 The lighting is great. There's a bit of theater, a bit sinister or a touch of danger with the smoke atop the fire escape, or is this another one of your clouds? The sign adds voyeuristic irony. Link to comment
ricardogirao 0 Posted August 31, 2008 a great cinematic mood, a lot of mysterio... someaction will surely happen soon, big suspense. fantastic capture jeff. regards. Link to comment
katzpjs 50 Posted August 31, 2008 The puff of steam at the top really adds some interest to the image, mostly because we cannot determine where it is coming from. And as far as the TRESPASSING goes... I would never consider it! 8~)# Link to comment
Jack McRitchie 150 Posted August 31, 2008 This is like a scene from a German expressionist film of the 20's or 30's. The building looms up in our path, all hard angles and deep shadows. A shiver passes through us; the steps could lead to a gallows. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted September 1, 2008 Great image here my friend of very amazing drama type light and composition, wishing you all of the best Link to comment
Emmanuel Enyinwa 0 Posted September 1, 2008 This print suggests so much to me, like a Weegee snapshot, a portrait of a time and place long gone, and existing only in the memories of those who lived through it. I can hear the children screaming in the rooms, the cars screeching by, and the shrill whistle of a policeman, a second before a shot rings out, then the loud siren of, well sirens, as they rush the unfortunate youth to the hospital, while the crowd gathers in glee in the dark alley, watching unfold just another evening in their lives. Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted September 1, 2008 It is a B/W Jeff, but for me it represent the brown brick houses that were my impression comming the first time to NY. It looks exactly as I remember it. with the bars ,ladders, and height, and even the smoke ....it is a very interesting angle, the light and shadows of floors as dispersed on the frame, is so well observed, demonstrating the construction.It looks as an emegency exite....The sign is also typically ( "don't disturb our privacy"....) ,as one of my memories and impressions there.( I think it will be interesting in color as well). Link to comment
vidisorin 0 Posted September 1, 2008 Great shot in difficult light conditions...and besides that there is a geometric continuity that visualy conducts the viewer throughout your image... Best regards Link to comment
mcclure 0 Posted September 1, 2008 Great capture - the movement, mood, and twist with the cloud all invite and warn against a trespass; fascinating metaphor. Link to comment
laurent_jaussi 0 Posted September 1, 2008 there a cinema (as Jack said) feel to it...a tension that something will happen...from the "no trepassing sign below" up to the smoke... the eye travels the scene waiting for action or the starting point of a travelling that moves the viewer to it....an atmosphere image....really nice..... Link to comment
bosshogg 4 Posted September 1, 2008 Bold, foreboding, straight forward with a no nonsense feel to it. The light from the top going to darkness at the bottom makes me want to ascend the stairs to seek it out and remove myself from the oppressive and frightening shadows. I like the tilted angle as if I'm viewing with my head cocked to the side. I'm going to take that shaft on the right and ride it straight out of the picture to more hospitable places. Link to comment
jeffl7 0 Posted September 1, 2008 Tero: My thought was to have the eye move up from the shadows and escape into the light, so I'm thrilled that you like this. A.K.: I have to confess, the smoke was added to give a little mystery. The original photo was horrible and needed a lot of work. Thanks. Donna: The original scene was quite lively and colorful, but I tried to make this mysterious by dimming the scene and adding the clouds/smoke. Joke: Light, light. All about the light.... Ricardo: I imagined ignoring the sign, running up the stairs, and finding a world on the roof full of strong drinks and supermodels. Na....I've grown up. Shawn: I digitally added the smoke to give some atmosphere. I recently saw a similar photo in B&W magazine and was thoroughly impressed and influenced. Jack: The gallows? Yikes. In Boston, no less. That long last climb up the stairs must be painful in this scenario. Rashed: Drama. Such a dramatic world I live in. Emmanuel: What a wonderful narrative to pair with this photo. Heart-pounding. I can't get the sound effects out of my head. Pnina: The city offers an infinite number of such scenes. Stairs from nowhere to nowhere. Foreboding. With patches of sky peeking through. Sorin: The geometry of the scene was what pulled me in. Thanks. John: The clouds are the escape. A heaven hovering above the hell. Laurent: My eye traveled up the stairs and into the piece of sky showing through. I'm glad you liked this. David: I can almost hear footsteps clattering up the metal stairs. This is the citified equivalent of your motels and truckstops. Thanks. Ruud: Thanks so very much! Link to comment
cjtj50 0 Posted September 1, 2008 This is excellentfrom the smoke to the darkness, shadows, lighting and not to mention the great composition. Very nice indeed and thank you for sharing. Take care Link to comment
toloduran 0 Posted September 1, 2008 Estupenda composicion e interesante perspectiva,con un sensacional ambiente captado,asi como una magnifica luz y monoromo. Un cordial saludo -Tolo. Link to comment
gordonjb 10,860 Posted September 2, 2008 As apposed to the standard, garden variety, non-absolute trespassing ? The interplay of light and shadow as well as the multitude of textures add to an rich composition. That little piece of wire is the icing on the cake! I love that your style is so wild and loosely defined at the same time as being recognizable and distinct. I'm still not sure how that happens, but I'm taking notes :-) Link to comment
adelah 0 Posted September 2, 2008 I like the smoke, gives indeed a mysterious mood..but why such a complete interdiction? what kind of secrets are hidden there? Excellent moody b/w composition! Link to comment
cherlyn 1 Posted September 2, 2008 I would never thought of trespassing at this place. Look forbidden with its height. Well chosen angle with clever play of light & shadow. Link to comment
bretsch 0 Posted September 3, 2008 Great composition, it’s obvious that you took great care into doing a very precise framing of the stairs, achieving something wonderful with all the lines in it. But what I enjoy most of all, is the patch of light on the bricks at the upper left corner. Terrific job, congratulations! Link to comment
bob_belanger 1 Posted September 3, 2008 Nicely done with B&W and great mood set with the angles and light. I also like the trail of smoke, it makes this a mysterous and dangerous palce. Trespassing would be out of the question, just walk away. Link to comment
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