people My Friend The General

He speak only a dozen words of English. He owns a large home in

Punjab State of India, yet he lives in Cheney Washington for 6

months each year with his son who owns a petrol station. Over the last

2 years, even though I speak no Punjabi and he no English, we are

close friends. He calls me brother. I call him the General, which he

was for 30 years in the Indian Army. I present to you my good friend,

General Singh.

I would crop a bit tighter. The sky is competing with the subject. Perhaps a bit of fill flash or just a curves adjustment to brighten up his face and eyes.

Intriguing portrait. The background is distracting. I agree the face and eyes need to be a bit beighter. Keep working. It has potential.