lmcinnis37 0 Posted August 31, 2008 Subject is too red, underexposed, (and she has a file in her mouth). Keep her away from sharp objects, please. Anyway, a few tweaks and some lightening of the whites of her eyes and teeth make the portrait look much nicer--except for the file. I could remove it, but why bother? Apparently she wants it there. Link to comment
delchev 0 Posted August 31, 2008 Lamar, thanks for the critique, actually the file is about 20cm away from the mouth, it is somewhat blurred, since it is a little shorter of the DoF, maybe I should blur it more. Obviously my monitor is way too bright - this is the third comment I get about dark or underexposed photoes (this one particularly I darkened a little). I will try converting it again, using another monitor. Best Regards! Peter Link to comment
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