dance recital

Dance recital, critique please.

I'd like it better if we could darken her up a little but keep everything else the same. Nice expression

I love this image but think it could be even better if her arms and torso weren't so washed out (I don't mind the face being washed out as I think it adds to innocence). I would also burn in the edges and the corners a bit more. Now for the really picky: there seems to be someone standing directly behind her -- I think the shot would be a whole lot better with him removed or at least darkened up. This would help to highlight our main subject -- and she certainly deserves it.

I would have preferred seeing more of the girl's left arm for balance, and a gentler exposure lighting-wise.

Expression very nice, colors as well... but it's a shame you croped her hand...