Motorcycles, 2nd shot

Hi,

Thank you very much for providing a picture that is large enough to really view and judge it! I do like the counterlight concept, and that the bikes are forming a slight diagonal parallel to the strips makes the picture interesting. A minor point is that the upper white strip should not end directly behind the handlebar, something that can be corrected digitally without pain. The one more major thing, however, is that I think the two bikes merge too much, optically. The upper contour of the lamp of the red one gows almost without break into the contour of the seat. A slightly lower viewpoint would have changed that.

Thanks you so much for having taken the time to look at my picture and comment on it! I appreciate your thoughts.

Now that you've pointed it out to me, I agree that the white strip is annoying, so I'll use photoshop to modify it. Unfortunately, it's too late to change my point of view and take the photo again, because I agree with you major point as well. I really like your comment because it allows me to think about my mistakes and pay more attention to that kind of details when I shoot again.

Regards, Evelyne