pampolin 1 Posted July 11, 2008 well, you got a nice light, but about the composition, i think you shouldn�t crop their legs Link to comment
j_sevigny 0 Posted July 11, 2008 This is a nice, intimate portrait. My two cents worth. This might have worked better as a horizontal, lowering the lens a little to get the court sign out of the frame. Also, you might have avoided the somewhat awkward (but not SOOOO awkward chopping off of the young mens' legs. Good work. John Link to comment
jonesphotography 0 Posted July 12, 2008 I agree with the camera angle and crop. I like the "court" in the BG it really provokes thought. Children in a Juvenile Court? Nice capture. Darren Link to comment
luis_ramirez8 0 Posted July 12, 2008 i like this shot alot...as for the legs, rules were meant to be broken. Link to comment
adam marksteiner 0 Posted July 12, 2008 I think having the legs run over like that gives it a sense of dynamic. I think if you had seen there hole leg it would have felt like they would be sitting there forever. But now I feel like even though they look relaxed they are about to jump up any minute. Link to comment
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