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Thanks!

The model and pose are very nice. For me, the yellow, red, white and sun light lines are all too distracting. Perhaps removing either the color or the sun lines would help.

Excellent composition! Your use of color with light is very original. This is almost a pure abstract. I am almost "unaware" of the model.

 

JIm Phelps

I think this particular image is the best in your series of sun-lit lines. Composition is very balanced. The lines following her curves give me bit of a Eric Kellerman sensation. Well done!!

 

cheers,

 

Rob