Busse Woods grasses at sunset

I was hoping to get some feedback about composition, etc. on this

one. I was trying for a silhoutte (worked), but I wanted the clouds

to be higher (although I think the perspective through the grasses

is interesting) and the higher group of grass to be closer to

following the rule of thirds. I was curious as to how others would

have composed this... thanks for all your help in advance.

I would have gone for a vertical shot of the group of tall grasses, with the black zone reduced to just a slither at the bottom of the shot (all to emphasize the tallness of the plants and the zonation of colours in the sky). I like the colours and silhouette effect.

Right on, Dominique.

 

 

Mike Banks.

I love this picture. Beautiful light, shadows.

I think thats a great photo, I wouldn't change anything at all