street PUr 233 Reading between the lines

All comments are welcome.

Beautiful b/w, with great composition and capture. Superb title. Best regards.

Bravo !

Very Good perspective; nice image. I think that also a good try is to eliminate the umbrela...Just thinkinh....:)

Very nice capture and composition!

excellent

Title, perspective, tones, composition... they all work together making this a GREAT photo. Well seen, Well captured! And for me the umbrella works.

Excellent geometry, nicely composed

Great image and great title.

R.Sekkar, Henri, Nataly, Mary, many thanks for your kind words.

 

Sergio, thanks for your comment. For me I believe that the umbrella gives a better balance to the shot. Another approach... Thanks for your remark

 

Milena, Amitai, thanks to take your time to look.

 

Geertje, I totally agree with your advice about the umbrella, it has his place...

 

Fernand

Fernand

Very strong graphic image. The play of the light is amazing. For me also the umbrella at the left is needed and closes the image at that side

 

PS: Bedankt voor je recente commentaar op 'Triangles'. Het beeld heeft een werkelijk absurd parcours in OE afgelegd. Bij een eerste posting terug met als commentaar: "a lot of potential. Please fix the artefact in the sky, the ONLY reason it was rejected ". Was inderdaad zo en heb dat dan ook gedaan. Bij hernieuwd aanbieden werd het vrij snel afgewezen omdat 'does not stand out enough'. Dus het tegenovergestelde van het eerste. Een bewijs dat de screening in OE allesbehalve logisch is....

Very interesting patterns. I would have tried also without the reader.

Excellent image and super title.

 

 

 

Well done

 

 

 

T.

Interesting capture and nice graphic B&W treatment to loose the background and accentuate the rail and shadows. At its current aspect ratio the umbrella is needed to balance the length. At another aspect ratio, for example 1 to 1, both the wall and the umbrella could be cropped out and you would still have a very strong image.

Jef and Tommie, many thanks for your comments.

 

Luca, for me the reader is an important part of this shot.

 

Gordon, I agree with your suggestion, thanks.

Stunning...the composition, the light and the caption. I like the idea of retaining the wall on the right. compliments -koushik

Just amazing...grt image ...

Koushik and Shiladitya, many thanks for your comments,

Fernand

Excellent capture.it composed creative and it has very good exposure. i like it so much.well done

 

Best Regards Hamed

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